Wednesday, 13 May 2020

Animal Town

It was slowly getting dark. Mia and her friend Ava were driving to Animal Town. Their yellow camper had finally reached a sign, it said. ANIMAL TOWN. "Were here!!" they both shouted. They parked ther van and went to the hotel. But instead of a person at the desk. There was a polar bear. "ARRR" screamed Ava. "Woah jezz, i'm just the hotel manager" the polar bear said. "Mia why didn't you tell me about the animals"said Ava a little angry "I thought you would know, it is ANIMAL Town"Mia exclaimed. "Well whatever let's sleep in the camper" said Ava and when they walked outside they realised that they left the camper unlocked. There were animals all over the camper their was a lion on the roof and a bear inside. Ava tumbled over, "A... A.. A.. A BEAR!" shouted Ava and she fainted. Mia carried her to the camper. "Do you think we could have our camper back asked Mia. "Sure" the animals said.

The next day they went out to explore. They saw statues and paintings of animals all over the walls of buildings and they even went to Cubs Cupcakes "Maybe Animal town isn't actually that bad" said Ava 
and they both laughed!! The End
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4 comments:

  1. Hi Rebecca
    I have really enjoyed reading your story series on your blog over lockdown! I like the banter between your characters and they way you are choosing to end your stories.
    Thanks for sharing your writing efforts.
    Miss J

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  2. Hello Rebecca,
    Thank you for sharing your creative point of view. It is quite fantastic to read that animals run the planet in the way that humans do. Thanks for your writing.

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  3. Hi Rebecca. Your story is so cool I love how most of the characters are talking animals, I would also love to see another part to this story I think it will be really intresting. Great work!
    - Ella from St Patricks school in Greymouth.

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  4. Hi Rebecca I'm Rachel from St Patricks school. I love the way you showed humour in your short story.

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