Months later… After Fred turned invisible, he had gotten used to being invisible. One day he was thinking up a plan to scare everyone, at the halloween festival tonight.
He dressed in white clothes and cut two holes in a old white sheet. He glued it to a hat and Fred put the sheet on his head and walked towards the place where the festival was. He could hear shouting and laughter. But it was soon going to be ruined! He sneaked onto the stage when everyone was getting drinks. He went barefoot so it looked like he was floating. “HELLO!” Fred shouted in a creepy voice. Everyone turned their heads. “ARRRR!!” shouted a little girl. “A ghost!!!” screamed another lady.
“RUN!” shouted a man and soon the park was empty. Fred started Laughing. “Maybe being invisible isn't so bad after all” and he walked back home.
Hello Rebecca,
ReplyDeleteI like your inuendo in the middle of your story. You are implying that something is going to happen and it does! What a fright the characters in your story receive from the ghost.
cheers