Tuesday, 12 May 2020

The Invisable Man

It was nearly midnight. Fred was getting ready to go to bed. He had been watching TV for hours. Fred went to brush his teeth like he always would. But somthing was wrong, he couldn't see himself in the mirror. What was happening! He thought it was from watching the TV for too long. So he went and got a glass of water, he gulped it down like it was the end of the world! He ran back to the mirror nothing had changed. He was INVISIBLE! He called the doctor. After a few minutes, he heard a knock on the door. "Hello" the doctor said. Fred opened the door. "Hello" Opps the doctor couldn't see him. She hopped back in her car and left. "NOOO!" shouted Fred. He went to bed and cried.

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous13 May 2020 at 12:41

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  2. Anonymous13 May 2020 at 12:42

    Hi Rebecca,I'm Heidi from St Patrick's school in Greymouth.

    I really like your story and I will definitely read the next part to see what happens.
    Next time just make sure that your punctuation is correct and words are spelt correctly.Otherwise I love this,

    Heidi

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Thank you for your positive thoughtful comment on my work.

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