I really like your DLO about The Hidden Cat Castle. What I really ;like about your DLO is that you have added pictures to go with your information about the hidden cat castle. What I think you should change is your colours. Do you want a castle in the future?
Hi Rebecca. My name is Rebekah and I go to Karoro School. I like how you have made your own short story and illustrated it. Do you have a favourite illustrator? If you want to comment on my blog, here is the link. https://karororebekahp.blogspot.com From Rebekah.
Greetings Rebecca
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hello Magenta thanks for your advice, have you ever written descriptive writing before? What did you write about. Thanks from Rebecca
DeleteHi Rebecca. My name is Rebekah and I go to Karoro School. I like how you have made your own short story and illustrated it. Do you have a favourite illustrator? If you want to comment on my blog, here is the link. https://karororebekahp.blogspot.com From Rebekah.
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