I really like your all about me slide because you've provided heaps of information about yourself like how you were born in 2009. What I think you should add more of is what your favourite food is but other than that you did a excellent job. Would you want to go to Paris when you grow up?.
Greetings Rebecca,
ReplyDeleteI really like your all about me slide because you've provided heaps of information about yourself like how you were born in 2009. What I think you should add more of is what your favourite food is but other than that you did a excellent job. Would you want to go to Paris when you grow up?.
- Magenta
Thank you Magenta for the ideas I changed my all about me slide if you want to have a look
Deleteand yes I would love to go to paris when I'm older
Hi Rebecca my name is Harlem and I got panmure bridge school I like like dogs I have my own one.the country I like is pairs.
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DeleteHi Harlem thanks for commenting. Would you like to go to paris when your older?
Deletethanks Rebecca